Thursday, January 22, 2009
Cameron's soccer blog
The score is 2 to 2 and his team is losing! With only 50 seconds left, all he will have is one more chance! His teammate passes him the ball on the right side of the field. He takes it down the sideline dodging and juking the players on the other team. His teammates are screaming his name! David! David! Pass the ball! He holds onto the ball scared that if he passes it they will mess it all up. He is at the top of the 18 yard box with 30 second left. This is his last shot. If he makes it we win, if he misses they tie, and they would not go on to the finals. He takes one last breath and puta all of his strength into the shot! It flys off the ground like an airplane taking off the run-way. It soars into the net making a "SWOOSH" sound when it hits it. Thats it! The game is over. They win. Final sccore 3-2! David's team lifts him off the ground puting him on there shoulders! Screaming his name!
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Very entertaining! It was interesting how within a short paragraph you were able to compose a plot and an internal conflict, whether to pass the ball or not. In this short paragraph you were able to convey a great story. Good job.
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